Term 3 Writing

WALT write a recount by thinking about and answering ‘Who? What? When? Why?’



Yesterday I went to the ear piercing shop. I got some earrings. They shot the earring in the hole. It felt weird. Then I went to Cole's home for tea. We had a yummy tea. I loved the topping on the pizza. I only eat the bottom of the pizza normally. Cole and Dad and I went to Westlake Park which was fun. We got to go to bed really late. I fell asleep in the car and my mum had to put me to bed. The next day I went to school in the rain. I was cold. At school we have been learning about how to count in tens. It is fun.  We didn't have fun the next school day because Coby was being naughty and she was being mean to me. Lelah and I like playing together. We play animals. It is fun playing that. We like playing together. We do writing all the time. We have fruit break every day. I have nice friends.

Student Voice – “ I have answered the four w questions in my writing”

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